So one of the really cool things about Wattpad is you can keep editing. It’s amazing what you see when your writing is off your page and onto a website; goofs, words and phrases used 72 (ok, maybe not 72, but definitely two) times in the same chapter and ways to make the story way, way, better, or at least, less mediocre. So now you can go to the link below and see the new, improved version of chapter 1 of my novel, whose name is going to change if I can ever figure how to do that on WATTPAD.
An Actor, a Writer, and a Rabbi's Wife Walk into a Bar... 