After intense comma and talkectomies, I have launched into the “Cut it unless it moves the action forward,” stage in my manuscripts. If I had begun with that, the aforementioned surgeries would have been shorter. There is also the possibility the novels will be only 22 sentences long by the time I’m done.

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