I so don’t want to cut this chapter


It’s about bogus American Idol auditions and it’s really, really funny* But I probably will, because I hear the voice of a potential editor and/or agent whisper in my ear** “This is very funny, but it stops the action.”

*Not merely my conclusion, but also that of an unbiased focus group that included my sister and my younger son.

**I know this is redundant. People do not whisper in your nose.

One thought on “I so don’t want to cut this chapter

  1. ~~Actually when they do a stage whisper, they whisper in your nose*
       Some focus groups are known to stage whispers with muted trumpets and trees in the background, and make you wait in the wings.


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