Secondhand epiphany


So yesterday’s epiphany was courtesy of one of my critique partners, who suggested I  put my protagonist/amateur sleuth in danger to create more tension in the story.* Of course, she’s right, and of course this creates several thousand continuity issues. Sigh

*I’m considering the possibility that she finds the character annoying and would like to bump her off.

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